Sa'u'o Conhistory; Please Critique

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Sa'u'o Conhistory; Please Critique

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Sa'u'o Conhistory can be found here.

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EDIT: Further information: The Sa'u'o Empire is the oldest civilization on Tlawasi, its planet, and has a rich and complex culture that can be nicely explained by its history. The Sa'u'o Empire has a history that is divided into 2 main Eons: The Preimperial -which goes back to the earliest (as including a prehistoric culture separetly would be tedious as well as pointless) archeological remains that show clues of Sa'u'oic culture through the development of civilization and writing in the swamp forests and later the coast, all the way until Nokijaka2 Ngi2ta2's unification of the Sa'u'o Empire- and the Imperial -which goes through the rapid development of the Solidarity Dynasty and the refining of imperial Sa'u'o society during the Great Security, to the achievements of the long lived Great Peace, through contact around the world with the Cosmopolitanism and the great cultural borrowings under current Universal Justice Dynasty.
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My critique:

I hate opening a thread only to find a link.
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That is quite harsh to say.
The OP obviously couldn't fit all of that on here.
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On the other hand, filling a thread with a lot of detailed text can be intimidating to some. But a little apetizer would have been nice.
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CMunk wrote:On the other hand, filling a thread with a lot of detailed text can be intimidating to some. But a little apetizer would have been nice.
Yes. Give me some reason to want to click on the link.
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I don't see anything blatantly wonky, but you'll learn my terrible secret that I'm not a history buff.
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I apologize Thakowsaizmu, and I shall edit my opening post to include some detail of the webpage right now. :oops:
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