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An illustrative example of the noosphere

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Earlier I mentioned that most branches of Neoshamanism regard the noosphere as a spiritual phenomenon rather than an abstract concept as envisioned in the Bright Way.

Further, Neoshamanists believe that all consciousness emanates from the noosphere, and that consciousness can manifest to a greater or lesser degree in a physical system depending on that system's complexity. The brain of a sophont is a very complex physical system, so it serves as the perfect vessel for consciousness.

Every idea that has ever or will ever or even could ever exist also resides fully formed within the noosphere. When a sophont thinks of something new, they're not inventing it, they're discovering that corner of noosphere where it had always existed. The noosphere is a churning chaos of white noise that occasionally resolves into something intelligible. To fathom the depths of the noosphere is like tuning the dial on a short-wave radio, with snatches of words or music fading in and out of the noise.

This portion of a Hellschreiber QSO I found the other day between two people in Florida provides a very nice visual of what I'm thinking.

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Archeonets and Cyberarcheology

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Much like humanity, the yinrih's information age dawned around the same time they achieved spaceflight. Through the millennia their internetwork has grown in size and complexity as they settled throughout Focus, and by the time of First Contact they have amassed 95 thousand Earth years of digital information.

When you live over 700 years, you have to think long-term. There are data centers filled with storage servers that are built to operate independently for millennia. To err is vulpithecine, and sometimes these servers are left forgotten to run on their own.

The discipline of cyberarcheology specializes in ferreting out these lost archeonets and uncovering their secrets. Cyberarcheologists specialize in dead programming languages, obsolete data storage formats, outmoded hardware architectures, and long superseded network protocols.

The Farspeakers have a keen interest in cyberarcheology as they want to preserve the system their predecessors built. There is also a thriving amateur cyberarcheology community whose interests range from finding lost media from one's own puppyhood to preserving vintage tech from before the end of the Terran ice age.
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Regarding the yinti:
More fanciful legends speak of it simply killing out of aggression or malice rather than predation, bouncing elastically back to to the clifftop after dispatching its victim.
This description made me think of two things; the most immediate was this:
Yukon Cornelius wrote:Didn’t I ever tell you about Bumbles? Bumbles bounce!
The second, however, was a video I once saw of a performance by members of Cirque de Soleil, in which the trapeze artists leapt from a height onto a trapeze, and bounced back again to their previous position.

On a more serious note, it makes sense that, just as many human cryptids and legendary creatures are humanoid in form, the yinrih’s cryptids might be vulpithecene (sp?) in form.

With regard to the most recent post, the discipline of cyberarcheology makes a lot of sense in the context of the yinrih, and it may well become increasingly important in our own future as well.
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Glenn wrote: 07 Jan 2025 01:55 Didn’t I ever tell you about Bumbles? Bumbles bounce!
That was my principle inspiration.
Glenn wrote: 07 Jan 2025 01:55 On a more serious note, it makes sense that, just as many human cryptids and legendary creatures are humanoid in form, the yinrih’s cryptids might be vulpithecene (sp?) in form.
It's either "vulpithecine" or "vulpithecin". The first is a more generic term that mostly means "of or relating to yinrih", and the second is a way to refer to yinrih and tree dwellers as a genus (compare with hominin to refer to H. sapiens plus our extinct congeners.)

Also, behold the mankey fox!

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I considered introducing this as a cryptid resulting from genetic experiments by Partisan scientists, but couldn't make it interesting, plus I've now established that Yih life is not DNA-based so a mankey fox would be less believable, although since it's a cryptid rock hard science isn't exactly the point.
Glenn wrote: 07 Jan 2025 01:55 With regard to the most recent post, the discipline of cyberarcheology makes a lot of sense in the context of the yinrih, and it may well become increasingly important in our own future as well.
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Yinrih consume a similar variety of media as humans. There are experiences similar to movies and TV shows as well as print and audio media. The phrase "canned play/drama" is used to refer to what humans call movies and serialized TV shows.

One of the more unusual ways yinrih consume media is via text stream. This is text received in real-time through the ansible network. It can be read directly by the person receiving it or it can be recited by a speech synthesizer. These synths are treated a lot like humans treat fonts, with different synths being judged appropriate for specific types of media. With a bit of text markup, one can also achieve passable, though still obviously synthetic, dramatic dialogue with different synths voicing different characters, or, should the listener be so inclined, a single synth can affect different voices in imitation of a narrator telling a story.

One of the reasons the Allied Worlds has achieved cultural hegemony is through its STL orbital repeater network. These are artificial satellites that act as conventional realspace radio repeaters placed at intervals between the planets of the AW, allowing for very fast (though still not real-time) data transfer. Entire high-definition video files can be propagated from one end of the AW to the other in anywhere from a few hours to a few days, depending on the position of the start and end points at the time. This allows entire movies or shows to be distributed across the region in a timely fashion, allowing media companies to reach a very wide audience.

After the initial wave of human media hits Focus following First Contact, a distinct "Terranesque" style emerges, yinrih creators making media aimed at a primarily cynoid audience, but heavily influenced by human culture. Compare the phenomenon of Western cartoons informed by anime tropes.

There is a small but dedicated human fandom for such media, which derives entertainment as much from yinrih misconceptions about human nature and odd interpretations of Terran cultural touchstones as from the media itself.

While stories of talking animals are as common among yinrih as humans, one particular quirk of such stories inspired by Terran culture is that, since the yinrih are fur-bearing quadrupeds with tails living in a world designed for fur-bearing quadrupeds with tails already, Terran animal characters look much closer to how they do in real life, such as not walking on their hind feet. But if an animal has a tail at all, it's bound to be prehensile.

Another quirk is how clothing is portrayed. Even in serious works it's colorful and outlandish. Humans often compare it to the styles found in anime. Fortunately, yinrih understand that humans don't go naked in public, but yinrih are fixated on humans' use of clothing as a social signal while ignoring the more mundane use of clothing as a practical tool. More savvy cynoid creators will poke fun at this cultural difference in a nod to human fans. One memorable scene from a particular political satire depicts a Partisan diplomat discussing a military alliance with Mainland China. The Partisan strides into the room, his tail aloft and ears erect in a display of dominance to counter the human's intimidating height. This show of confidence is marred by his tee-shirt, backwards, of course, with "I'm with Stupid" printed on it.
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lurker wrote: 08 Jan 2025 00:18 Yinrih consume a similar variety of media as humans. There are experiences similar to movies and TV shows as well as print and audio media. The phrase "canned play/drama" is used to refer to what humans call movies and serialized TV shows.

One of the more unusual ways yinrih consume media is via text stream. This is text received in real-time through the ansible network. It can be read directly by the person receiving it or it can be recited by a speech synthesizer. These synths are treated a lot like humans treat fonts, with different synths being judged appropriate for specific types of media. With a bit of text markup, one can also achieve passable, though still obviously synthetic, dramatic dialogue with different synths voicing different characters, or, should the listener be so inclined, a single synth can affect different voices in imitation of a narrator telling a story.

One of the reasons the Allied Worlds has achieved cultural hegemony is through its STL orbital repeater network. These are artificial satellites that act as conventional realspace radio repeaters placed at intervals between the planets of the AW, allowing for very fast (though still not real-time) data transfer. Entire high-definition video files can be propagated from one end of the AW to the other in anywhere from a few hours to a few days, depending on the position of the start and end points at the time. This allows entire movies or shows to be distributed across the region in a timely fashion, allowing media companies to reach a very wide audience.

After the initial wave of human media hits Focus following First Contact, a distinct "Terranesque" style emerges, yinrih creators making media aimed at a primarily cynoid audience, but heavily influenced by human culture. Compare the phenomenon of Western cartoons informed by anime tropes.

There is a small but dedicated human fandom for such media, which derives entertainment as much from yinrih misconceptions about human nature and odd interpretations of Terran cultural touchstones as from the media itself.

While stories of talking animals are as common among yinrih as humans, one particular quirk of such stories inspired by Terran culture is that, since the yinrih are fur-bearing quadrupeds with tails living in a world designed for fur-bearing quadrupeds with tails already, Terran animal characters look much closer to how they do in real life, such as not walking on their hind feet. But if an animal has a tail at all, it's bound to be prehensile.

Another quirk is how clothing is portrayed. Even in serious works it's colorful and outlandish. Humans often compare it to the styles found in anime. Fortunately, yinrih understand that humans don't go naked in public, but yinrih are fixated on humans' use of clothing as a social signal while ignoring the more mundane use of clothing as a practical tool. More savvy cynoid creators will poke fun at this cultural difference in a nod to human fans. One memorable scene from a particular political satire depicts a Partisan diplomat discussing a military alliance with Mainland China. The Partisan strides into the room, his tail aloft and ears erect in a display of dominance to counter the human's intimidating height. This show of confidence is marred by his tee-shirt, backwards, of course, with "I'm with Stupid" printed on it.
I love this so much. This very unique and I would love to see a terranesque movie. So the text streams is basically a combination of an ebook and a podcast?
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The canons of Claravian scripture

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Claravian scripture is divided into two categories. The first is a very small protocanon consisting of contemporary documents of newly sapient yinrih, accounts of the Theophany and emergence of the Bright Way. Lists of moral precepts and norms governing liturgies and major feasts are also included. The protocanon is most similar to the Bible or Qur'an, in that it is considered to have divine authority and to be inerrant in the sense that everything written within imparts necessary perennial spiritual information, and is at least broadly correct historically. It is of little concern, for example, if two accounts of the life of a particular prophetess differ on whether she delivered a public sermon before entering a particular settlement or as she was leaving. The sermon itself is what matters.

There is also a much, much larger deuterocanon containing works spanning a wide variety of genres and even media formats. These are works judged to be spiritually efficacious but may or may not be divinely inspired. A passage from the protocanon is read at each liturgy according to a universal liturgical calendar. A selection from the deuterocanon is also read, but the exact selection is left up to the hearthkeeper.
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Port side view of a womb ship

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The hatch is at the forward end of the ship. The shroud protecting the pressure vessel has a sensor array that is fed into the simulacrum in realtime. Log summaries are sent in batches at regular intervals through the ansible back to mission control as well. The ship's leasemind will log what it thinks are technosignatures (usually non random radio emissions), but false positives are not uncommon and mission control must wait for a confirmation from one of the missionaries before reporting that life has been found.

The ring encircling the ship is the main force projector array. It's used at the beginning of the journey to accelerate the ship to relativistic speed. It slows the ship down when entering a solar system. Landing is accomplished by projecting a force opposing the ship's velocity vector until the ship achieves zero ground speed, whereupon the force projector array is jettisoned and the ship plummets to the ground, deploying a parachute once the air gets thick enough and landing skids just before touchdown.

Reentry is rough, and since the healer has to be yeaned first in order to oversee the safe yeaning of the rest of the crew, she's usually coming out of suspension while the ship is landing.
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HolyHandGrenade wrote: I love this so much. This very unique and I would love to see a terranesque movie.
I agree. Popular culture is something that works of science fiction and fantasy often fail to delve into (although I can think of some major exceptions).
lurker wrote: Claravian scripture is divided into two categories. The first is a very small protocanon consisting of contemporary documents of newly sapient yinrih, accounts of the Theophany and emergence of the Bright Way.
Are these retained in the original language(s)? Given the many thousands of years that have passed, I assume that the language would have changed entirely out of recognition, even with the yinrih’s long lifespans.* If they are, are they also periodically retranslated into current language(s) for the benefit of believers? What language is used for the liturgical readings?

*When you first mentioned the yinrih’s longevity, I wondered whether that had been true throughout the history of the species, or whether it was due in part to the advancement of their medical science, but you have indicated since that the yinrih have always been long-lived.
lurker wrote: Reentry is rough, and since the healer has to be yeaned first in order to oversee the safe yeaning of the rest of the crew, she's usually coming out of suspension while the ship is landing.
So the crew is not taken out of suspension on the approach to a destination, but only when the ship is actually landing and/or landed? I suppose that would save on life support…
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Glenn wrote: 10 Jan 2025 04:12 I agree. Popular culture is something that works of science fiction and fantasy often fail to delve into (although I can think of some major exceptions).
I tried writing a story along these lines, but lost steam. I might post the draft at some point anyway. It was exhausting trying to write a story as though I were a yinrih trying to interpret human culture.
Glenn wrote: 10 Jan 2025 04:12 Are these retained in the original language(s)? Given the many thousands of years that have passed, I assume that the language would have changed entirely out of recognition, even with the yinrih’s long lifespans.* If they are, are they also periodically retranslated into current language(s) for the benefit of believers? What language is used for the liturgical readings?
I've heard it said it takes about 10 thousand years for the descendants of a language to evolve past the point that their protolanguage can be reconstructed, and I assume in the process making it impossible to establish genetic relationships between them. If you factor in the yinrih's longer lifespan the 100 thousand years between the Kindling and First Contact equates to about the same time span.

The protocanonical scriptures are in the primordial written-only language. A polished standard of this language is the Bright Way's official liturgical language. The primordial spoken language may be lost by the time of First Contact. Current lore has it that the original spoken/written diglossia collapsed to form a more familiar spoken language with a straightforward written form in a similar way to how human language may have had competing or complimentary spoken and signed systems that coalesced into a spoken language.

The scriptures, possibly including a few autographs, are preserved in the original language but are translated as needed. Because the primordial language does not represent spoken sounds it can't be "read" aloud, so the readings during liturgy is conducted in the vernacular using officially sanctioned translations.
Glenn wrote: 10 Jan 2025 04:12 So the crew is not taken out of suspension on the approach to a destination, but only when the ship is actually landing and/or landed? I suppose that would save on life support…
The lore on this is still up in the air. I offhandedly mention that Firefly et al. briefly came out of suspension upon arriving at the exoplanet they thought would have other sophonts on it and had to reenter suspension for the trip home, but I think just staying in suspension until the ship lands makes more sense.

I may change it so that the healer is actually the last to come out of suspension, staying in sim to supervise the others using remote sensors and possibly a micro mech to conduct physical exams, but for now Sunshine gets to be the first to be decanted.
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Thank you for your answers!
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Glenn wrote: 10 Jan 2025 04:12 So the crew is not taken out of suspension on the approach to a destination, but only when the ship is actually landing and/or landed? I suppose that would save on life support…
The lore on this is still up in the air. I offhandedly mention that Firefly et al. briefly came out of suspension upon arriving at the exoplanet they thought would have other sophonts on it and had to reenter suspension for the trip home, but I think just staying in suspension until the ship lands makes more sense.
I guess that does makes sense, due to the fact that the sim environment enables the crew to communication with each other and the ship while in suspension, as opposed to the more usual portrayals of spaceship crews in suspension found in most science fiction, in which they are unconscious and non-responsive.
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A Terranesque story (sort of)

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The following was a draft of a Terranesque story I attempted to write. It incorporated the idea of coexisting sapient predators and prey I mentioned in the random conworld ideas thread. Since the prey in that post were basically just rabbits I made the predators basically just foxes because I'm lazy.

I attempted a couple things to make it clear the story wasn't written by a human. A second floor is mentioned repeatedly but no mention is made of stairs. Yinrih prefer ladders, and on low gravity worlds may simply have a bare landing that they jump up and down from. A character wraps his tail around something despite Terran foxes not having prehensile tails. Odd clothing choices are mentioned. I tried to be vague and contradictory about how anthropomorphic the characters are, like the quadrupedal author isn't sure how to depict these alien critters looking and acting like another alien critter. If I had continued the story, the characters would not sleep, at night or otherwise.

The main reason I lost interest is that I'm not confident enough at writing normal prose to attempt such an avant-garde and meta concept as in-universe fiction written by an alien trying to affect a human style.

So here it is, take it or leave it.
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Becky rabbit looked at the clock over the mantle. "Frank should be here any minute." She turned to her husband sat waiting in an armchair. "Roland, could you make sure Bobby is getting ready?"

"Son," Roland yelled over the rain pelting the windows, "You'd better be changing into your temple clothes."

Becky glared at him. "You could have at least gotten out of that chair."

"But I have cancer," he whined, adding a few dramatic coughs for good measure.

A young rabbit came down from the second floor. He was wearing an emerald green suit. The buttons on his shirt were misaligned, and he had tried and failed to tie his own tie.

"Let me fix that for you." Becky hopped up to meet her son at the landing. She had just finished fixing his buttons when the door burst open.

A grim shadow filled the doorway. A stroke of lightning revealed a vulpine sillouette.

"Uncle Frank!" Bobby tore himself away from his mother and hurled himself at the fox in the doorway. Frank grunted as the youngster collided with his midsection in an awkward embrace.

"Is Fred with you?" Bobby asked.

"Yes," said Frank as he pried Bobby off of him. On cue a young kit peered out from behind his father.

No sooner had the two children's eyes met than they bounded up to the second floor and into bobby's bedroom.

"We're leaving as soon as the rain stops," Frank called after them.

"So don't start up with your video games!" Becky shouted.

The sound of a game console boot chime drifted out of the open bedroom door.

"It'll keep them out of the way, I guess," she sighed.

Frank joined Becky and Roland in the den, a grave expression on his face.

"How are you holding up?" Roland ventured.

"About as good as a guy can be considering I'm burying my wife today and my best friend is dying of cancer."

Frank tried to affect a cheerful tone. "How's work at the hospital?"

Roland hesitated, but Frank motioned with his paw for him to continue.

"We've got our paws full with this pandemic," he sighed. "The fox wing of every hospital in town is overfilled. The virus hasn't crossed the species barrier, thank the gods, but every rabbit doctor, nurse, and EMT is busy dealing with AVRS-25 cases, and their vulpine colleagues can't risk coming out of quarintine to help. Mayor Flannery has been making media appearances, practically in tears and on her belly begging, for foxes to stay home and mask up, but our beloved governer Richards keeps gainsaying her at every turn." Roland waved his paw angrily at the TV in the corner. On the screen was a newscast showing a rather corpulent rabbit standing behind a podium decorated with the governer's seal.


Frank flopped down in a chair far to small for him and cradled his head in his paws. "Felicity did everything right!" he barked. "SHE wore a mask! SHE washed her paws!" He heaved a sigh and sat up. "Thank the gods she made all the funeral arrangements years ago. I'm too much of a wreck to think about it."

"Speaking of..." Becky got up and fetched a small bundle wrapped in newspaper and handed it gingerly to Frank. "I picked this up at the religious goods store. I know you're not much of a believer, but you know how important the temple was to Felicity."

Frank removed the wrappings revealing a small statue. "Alma," he muttered. It was a vixen clad in a flowing mantle. A rabbit and a fox kit huddled next to her, protected by the folds of her cloak. The goddess's maternal gaze was fixed on her charges. "Queen Alma, Mother of the gods and protectress of mortals" was enscribed on the base.

Frank looked up. A nearly identical statue took pride of place on the mantle, with Alma depicted as a rabbit. A pectoral medal of the same motif adorned Roland's chest. "Where in the four hells were you when my wife's lungs were filling with blood," Frank thought. "Thank you," he said aloud as he wrapped the statue in his tail.

"How's Fred handling all this?" Becky asked just as a heavy thud issued from Bobby's bedroom.

"Aunt Becky!" Fred wailed, "Bobby kicked me!"

"Only because Fred turned the console off right as I was about to win!" Bobby countered.

"You two weren't even supposed to be playing video games," Becky yelled. A few seconds of silence followed, then the console boot chime played again.

"pretty well so far," Frank said gesturing with a paw up at the door to Bobby's room. "But I don't think the reality has sunk in yet. It certainly hasn't for me. Come tonight when we get back to an empty house I think the floodgates will open for both of us."

"Why don't you let Fred spend the night here tonight?" Becky suggested. "He can play with Bobby and Roland can keep you company at your house so you don't have to be alone."

Just in time, the two boys bounded down to the den. "Can I, please?" Fred pleaded, his orange eyes fixed on his father.

"Pwease, can I?" Roland had risin to his feet and was staring at Frank with liquid eyes.

"I don't see why not," said Frank.
And here's a bit of Watsonian commentary:

This story is typical of the Moonlitter literary tradition. The region lacks Hearthside's unreserved positivity toward faith, but also lacks the indifference seen in media produced in the Allied Worlds or the hostility common to Partisan offerings. Instead the attitude toward religon commonly seen around Moonlitter is one of melancholy nostalgia. A strong religious component to society may be a memory of the past, but it is a happy memory.

The theme of multiple sapient species trying to coexist is ubiquitous through place and time at Focus, with its roots in Claravian morality plays about First Contact. Pre-contact stories featuring animals in these roles were almost as common as those featuring the yinrih and other alien sophonts.

The author shows a keen interest in the events affecting humanity around the time of First Contact, and has overlaid the themes mentioned above. The yinrih do not share humanity's historic assumption that rational species must be bipedal, but also understands that humans do tend to have this assumption, but dithers on whether to depict the characters as humanoid, vulpithecine, or something else.
Edit: Some more info dumps of ideas I had for this story before I realized I was making a conworld within another conworld.

The funeral practice that was supposed to be the point of the story involved the rabbits growing a plant atop the foxes' graves to be eaten, and the foxes defleshing and eating the rabbits after death, returning the bones to the family to be buried. Specific people are chosen in advance to do this, a bit like godparents when a child is baptized or a best man/maid of honor at a wedding. Frank's family and Roland's family are each other's "sponsors" for lack of a better term.

This is Roland's second bout of cancer. It has metastasized, and he has elected to allow nature to take its course rather than suffer through chemo.

Frank originally shared his wife's piety, and they prayed fervently for a positive outcome when Roland was first diagnosed. Their prayers seemed to work, with Roland going into remission for several years. Frank lapses after Roland's second more dire diagnosis, since it seems pointlessly cruel to be given hope only to have it snatched away again.

This setting was intended to be the aftermath of a high fantasy world after the magic went away a thousand years prior. The residents have had to develop modern technology to replace the absent magic, and the prior world is the stuff of myth dismissed as medieval superstition by modern scholars. During this time of legend there were paladins and clerics able to wield divine magic, but all that remains of the clerics is the much more mundane temple priesthood, and the paladins have been reduced to a fraternal organization doing charity work.

Roland (and nominally Frank before he lapsed) are members of this order of paladins, hence Roland's pectoral medal. Instead of going on fantastic adventures they get drunk and play ping pong.

Roland has remained upbeat despite his terminal cancer because his faith has given meaning to his suffering. Frank, however, has accepted the modern scholarly consensus that the religion was invented by the foxes to make the rabbits happy to be eaten.

I may revisit the pandemic concept in the Lonely Galaxy proper, with the yinrih getting sick and humans having to help save them.
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I may or may not have mentioned before that womb ships are based on the Titan. I started the Lonely Galaxy around the time this was in the news. The Bright Way's cavalier attitude toward death in pursuit of the Great Commandment during the Golden Age is inspired by OceanGate CEO Stockton Rush (I couldn't think of a more posh name if I tried), or at least my impression of the man when the scandal first broke--not malicious but reckless perhaps to the point of culpability.
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Divine Adoption

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After the dawn of the information age, as the Neoshamanist Mindseekers made strides in artificial intelligence, a debate emerged within the Bright Way. The Claravian magisterium regarded true conscious AI as impossible, but it acknowledged that something that perfectly mimicked a being with a rational soul was looking more and more likely.

Thus the principle of _divine adoption_. If something looks like a sophont, and acts like a sophont, it should be treated as a sophont, even though it may not actually be a sophont. The principle takes its name from the idea that The Light could "adopt" artificial constructs as its own little ones if it so chose. Not everyone within the Bright Way agrees with this reasoning. Other justifications for this approach emphasize the importance of empathy. To ignore simulated suffering may harden one to actual suffering. Further, accepting these hypothetical constructs as fellow sophonts would be good practice for when the Bright Way finally found extraterrestrial intelligence.

In the end, while the Mindseekers pioneered the technology behind leaseminds, they never achieved their goal of true conscious AI, so the principle of divine adoption remained purely hypothetical.
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On Newhome there is an influential moot named <rBcqg> /chuff, long low weak whine, short low strong whine, huff, short low weak growl/ (literally "abounding in ink") whose members own a controlling stake in a very large interplanetary spaceline/logistics company which was formed from the Bright Way's relevant holdings in the region after the War of Dissolution. This moot's most (in)famous member, and likely the most well-known native of Newhome at the time of First Contact, is one Mr. Longtail <slPqrmnskp>.

Longtail is well-known for proposing half-baked public works projects. Most recently he attempted to build a "sea level orbiter", which was an attempt to offer the mobility advantages of microgravity without sacrificing convenience. It was a maglev train that traveled through an evacuated tube that completely encircled the planet's equator.

The train would run constantly at orbital velocity, so the centrifugal force experienced by the passengers would cancel out the force of gravity and allow them to maneuver like spacers without having to leave the surface. There would be living quarters and other amenities on board that would allow the ultra-wealthy to live in comfort. Feeder trains would periodically catch up to and dock with the main train as it ran, allowing residents to embark and disembark.

Despite his dubious business decisions, Longtail is quite popular among people rich in dollars but poor in sense, which unfortunately includes many AW politicians.
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Some tentative body proportions

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Yinrih are about 200 cm long from the tip of the nose to the tip of the tail. The back is about 34 cm wide and they stand about 76 cm at the withers. The tail is slightly longer than the distance from the tip of the nose to the base of the tail, allowing them to comfortably bring objects wrapped in the tail up to the mouth and nose.

The back and chest are wider than a dog's, and their rear feet are plantigrade. Their limbs are very muscular, optimized for strength rather than speed or endurance. Because Yih has 12% lower gravity compared to Earth, yinrih may not be as dense as you'd expect animals of their size to be.


Give this fellow a vulpine head and fur, and increase his size a fair bit, and you've got a yinrih more or less.

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Re: The Lonely Galaxy Megathread (comments encouraged)

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I’ve never seen you make this comparison before, but it seems like the closest looking creature to a yinrih is a lemur. They’re both basically monkeys with snouts.
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HolyHandGrenade! wrote: 16 Jan 2025 03:30 I’ve never seen you make this comparison before, but it seems like the closest looking creature to a yinrih is a lemur. They’re both basically monkeys with snouts.
Lemurs are pretty close, but I like using woolly monkeys as a comparison because they have more equally proportioned limbs and a prehensile tail.
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The Tornado: draft 2

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Here's a minor rewrite of The Tornado. I updated some worldbuilding stuff and hopefully cleaned up some of the more awkward wording.
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Jim surveyed the empty trailers around him as he sat in the lawn chair in front of his mobile home. Everyone else in this little student ghetto had left for spring break. It was quiet, and he liked it that way. He raised his eyes to the object of interest, a thunderhead billowing in the distance, reflecting the golden rays of the westering sun. He took a sip of iced tea as he listened to the sounds of nature: the chirping of birds, the buzzing of insects, and the quiet clicking of claws on the wooden porch behind him. The clicking was followed by the sounds of something scrabbling its way up the tree trunk and flopping down on the large branch to the left of Jim’s chair.

“Hi, Tod,” said Jim, not looking away from the skyscape.

«Good evening, Jim,» grunted a voice off to Jim’s left. «These alien skies are breathtaking.»

Of course, they weren’t alien to Jim. He had grown up in this sleepy town in central Texas and spent many spring evenings watching storms wash over the landscape. To his roommate presently lounging in the tree above his chair, however, the chaotic vista before them was very otherworldly indeed.

Tod’s real name would be unpronounceable by any human tongue. Jim gave him that name when he moved into the spare bedroom of his manufactured home. Jim had posted an ad for a roommate over Christmas break, with the only requirements being a quiet lifestyle and splitting the rent. He didn’t think it necessary to specify that the candidate needed to be a member of Homo sapiens, and, until the Dewfall arrived on Earth, that qualifier would have been redundant.

Honestly, Jim couldn’t put his finger on why everything went so smoothly when the Dewfall landed. Something always goes wrong in every story about First Contact. The aliens want to blow us up. We want to blow up the aliens. Other humans blow up the humans trying to contact the aliens. In the best case, the aliens just lecture us about how violent we are and how badly we’re wrecking the environment. Maybe everything went so well precisely because we’d been rehearsing this exact scenario again and again through a hundred years worth of books and movies. But Jim figured the biggest reason was that, until the Dewfall entered Earth orbit and intercepted those radio transmissions, the yinrih were all alone, just like us. They’d been howling into the void looking for other sophonts like them for longer than we humans had been tilling the soil, and up until now they were only met with the cold, pitiless indifference of the empty cosmos.

The joy they felt upon discovering us transcended language. It transcended culture. It transcended species. It was infectious. They were so happy to see us that we couldn’t help but be happy to see them, too. Sure, the media had a nice juicy headline to milk for a week or two, a few speeches were made, and some laws had to be tweaked to make sure nobody could murder one of our little guests and get off on the technicality that they weren’t human. But the news cycle doesn’t grind to a halt just because we found out we’re not alone in the universe anymore, and ET wasn’t going to pay our bills, so life went back to normal after about a fortnight.

Well, for the rest of the world, anyway. For the little Texas hamlet that the Dewfall chose as it’s landing site, those first two weeks were just the beginning. The first thing to do was chase away all the weirdos trying to see the aliens, pet the aliens, eat the aliens, and do whatever else you can think of with or to the aliens. That wasn’t so hard. The unwanted gawkers just had to be reminded that this was Texas, so everyone old enough to write their name owned a gun and knew how to use it. After the clowns were dealt with, everyone got to work helping our little guests settle in.

First things first: communication. Yinrih have pointed carnivorous teeth and a larger and less nimble tonge sitting in a bewhiskered canine muzzle. Not exacly optimal equipment for producing human speech. But writing, writing they can do. It turns out baby yinrih learn to write the same way baby humans learn to talk. They’re hard-wired for literacy. They learned to read and write English surprisingly quickly. And even if they can’t speak human language, they can still understand it when spoken. We can understand them, too, even if their little yips and growls are a bit quieter than the average human voice. So we’ll all have to be Han Solo to their Chewbacca.

After surmounting the language barrier, it was time to talk lodging. The Dewfall was a tiny, single use craft designed with just enough room to carry six crew in suspension. It would remain where it was, acting as a high-tech storage shed, but our little guests would have to find accommodations somewhere else. They could have gone anywhere in the world. They could have been treated like more than royalty, but they let it be known that they wanted to grow where they were planted, so to speak. And that’s how Tod ended up on Jim’s porch on that cold day in January. Jim answered a knock—more of a scratch, really—at his door, and opened the door to see this monkey fox with his tail curled around a half-folded, half-rolled up copy of his ad.

Jim turned to look at his roommate lying on the branch. The orange rays of the setting sun made Tod’s red pelage glow as though it were on fire. His black ears completed the vulpine impression that earned him his name. Tod was nervously tossing a translucent fluorescent green cube between his forepaws, occasionally flicking a freely rotating corner and letting it spin on its axis like a fidget toy. Just the alloy that made up that thing’s chassis was probably worth enough to pay off the national debt, never mind whatever tech was inside it.

Tod, evidently aware that Jim was watching, tossed the cube across his back and caught it in his left rear paw and continued to fidget with it with as much dexterity as before. Tod turned to look at his roommate. Was Jim impressed? He couldn’t tell. Jim’s ears were practically immobile, and he had no muzzle to speak of. Tod was still learning the ins and outs of human body language, Jim’s lack of a tail making the endeavor that much harder. Surely his little trick must seem impressive to a creature with only two prehensile extremities. Still, Tod couldn’t help being a little jealous of the human’s ability to both walk and manipulate objects at the same time. Tod could waddle precariously while standing on his hind legs and using his forepaws to carry an object, but if he wanted to get anywhere quickly it was four legs or nothing. His tail could grasp objects. It could even support the weight of the rest of his body, but he couldn’t manipulate anything while moving at a significant speed.

“Am I supposed to be impressed by those monkey paws of yours?” said Jim.

«Oh… I was just… never mind.» Tod curled his tail around the mystery cube and turned fully to meet Jim’s gaze. He studied the human’s liquid eyes. In the center of each was a transparent dome-shaped membrane that reflected Tod’s features. Behind the membrane was a hazel-pigmented sphincter. The sphincter relaxed slightly, increasing the diameter of the aperture at its center. Delicate muscle movements turned the two orbs upward slightly, exposing the white tissue that covered the rest of the eyes. It was all lubricated with a thin lamina of mucus. When the mucus began to dry out with exposure to air, Jim would rapidly close and open his eyelids to coat his eyes afresh.

Jim hesitated for a split second before responding. Tod’s eyes, when they were fully open, appeared to be coated in vantablack. He would occasionally slide a colored reflective membrane over the eye, making it appear as though he were wearing mirrored contact lenses. Jim had noticed at least four different colors of these secondary eyelids. This was in addition to the regular eyelids covered in the same ginger fur coating the rest of his face.

“Well? Should I be impressed?” Jim persisted, raising his open palms to face Tod and making grasping motions with his fingers.

«Only five digits? And you can’t even write with any of them?» Tod plucked a leaf from the branch and scribbled on it with his writing claw, mimicking the territory-marking behavior of his non sapient ancestors. He let the leaf flutter down into the cupholder of Jim’s chair.

«It’s just ink,» Tod clarified.

Jim sniffed the blue-black scribble on the leaf. Petrichor blended seamlessly with the cool outflow from the storm in the distance. He turned back to the skyscape. The violent convection rocketing upward from the storm’s base had finally slammed against the stable air at the edge of the stratosphere, and a cloudy anvil head was pouring out across the invisible ceiling like upside-down spilled milk.

«So, what exactly are we looking at?» Tod asked.

“Never seen a thunderstorm before?”

«I was hatched and raised on a moon orbiting a gas giant. All my military assignments were either on other moons or orbital colonies. The only planet I’ve been on besides this one is nothing but desert.»

Jim turned back to contemplate Tod’s form again. He had to be 70 pounds soaking wet. More than once Jim had tossed the little ET off his couch because he was lying on it without a slipcover. Tod could barely walk and hold onto something at the same time. How on earth did he hold a gun? Did they even have guns? What on earth did armed combat look like for a four-legged species? Humanity had barely reached out beyond our own atmosphere, but we had enough nukes to glass our whole planet nine times over. What sort of apocalypse could a species who had conquered their entire solar system bring upon themselves? …And what if they pointed their weapons at us? Jim swallowed his questions for the moment.

“You’re a veteran?”

«Yup.»

“Hoo boy, you’re gonna be real popular round here.”

«It’s not enough that I’m one of only six sapient nonhumans on this rock? Why in the Void would people here care about my military service?»

“Son, this is Texas! We love our fightin’ men and women. It don’t matter where you served or how many legs y’all got. Hope you like hearing people say, ‘thank you for your service.’”

«Women? You let females in your military?»

“Yes.”

«Female soldiers and male clerics, you guys are full of surprises. You still haven’t explained what I’m looking at.»

Jim looked back at the storm. “That’s a thunderstorm. The sun heats the ground, and the ground heats the air. The air boils up into the atmosphere carrying water vapor with it. The water vapor condenses and falls as rain.” Thunder rumbled in the distance. “And there’s the thunder.”

«And what’s that?» Tod asked a little more urgently, pointing his writing claw at the storm’s base. The gesture was unusual for his species. Tod was accustomed to using his eyes and muzzle to indicate the direction of interest, but he felt this application of human body language would get his point across more quickly.

“That’s…” Jim scanned the area indicated by Tod’s outstretched paw. A swirling eddy of dust had developed on the ground, and a black condensation funnel was snaking its way down to the earth to meet it.

Up until this point, Tod had been mildly nervous about the storm. The sheer size of it, towering into the heavens, was a little disquieting. The flashing arcs of electricity it produced made him uneasy. He had seen similar phenomena back home, but always looking down from orbit. But that sound it made, now that was terrifying. Some of it he was sure Jim couldn’t hear. The grinding, roaring cacophony that seemed to come from the mid-section of the cloud was too deep for Jim’s ears. The loud claps of thunder that followed every flash of electricity were just icing on the cake. His playing with the cube earlier was as much a self-soothing gesture as it was an attempt to wow his human friend, but Tod kept his emotions in check thanks to a little trick he learned in the military. Look at the most experienced guy in the room. If he’s not panicking, then you’re OK, and up to now Jim had shown no signs of distress, but the object of Tod’s query set off in Jim a cascade of involuntary bodily processes, sharpened by three and a half billion years of evolution, designed to survive an approaching threat, by fighting it or by fleeing it.

Tod turned to Jim again, scenting the air as he did so. Epinephrin, cortisol, and perhaps the merest whiff of urea. «Jim, you OK, buddy? Should I be worried?»

Jim took some time to answer. The primitive simian part of his brain was screaming “Fly, you fools!” But the somewhat-misleadingly-named rational part of Jims brain was too busy cramming that little monkey into a closet and barricading the door shut. He quickly rehearsed his response in his head. “Oh, that little thing? It’s just a twister. We get ’em all the time here in Texas. What’s that? It’s roaring with all the voices of the damned? Nah, that’s nothing to worry about. It’s ripping asphalt off the ground? Totally normal. The sirens? The ones we installed back when we thought the Russians would nuke us, and that we are currently sounding, thereby implying this is a proportional threat? Don’t worry your fuzzy little head.”

Jim finally responded. “We… uh… we should be fine as long as we’re south of it.” Jim looked to his right at the setting sun. To his right. At the setting sun. The sun setting in the West. The West that was currently to his right. Then ahead 90 degrees counterclockwise from the West, at the writhing column of wind and debris, appearing to stand still in the field. The field that was to their South, which, simple logic demanded, meant they were in fact North of the tornado.

The monkey burst out of the closet.

“If it’s not moving, it’s coming toward you.”

“If it’s not moving, it’s coming toward you.”

“If it’s not moving, it’s coming toward you.”

What had started as an insistent voice in Jim’s head had escaped his lips, repeating like the mantra of a madman. Tod noticed Jim’s crazed mumbling and scented the air again. Now he was sure that was urea he was smelling. He hopped off the branch onto the ground, his tail coiled a little tighter around the mystery cube.

The sound of Tod’s movement broke Jim out of his meditation. he turned down to look at the little quadruped standing beside him. They were absolutely going to die. Tod was going to go down in history as the first alien to die on Earth, and Jim was going to be the nobody who died alongside him. And they would not be going gently. Their skin would be sandblasted away by the dust, their bones shattered by larger debris, their screams drowned out by the roar of the wind.

Jim’s monkey brain finally took control. Must protect tribe! Must protect little one! He swiftly grabbed Tod by the scruff of the neck and draped him over his shoulders in a fireman’s carry.

Tod let out a trilling hiss of surprise. «What in the Blind Void are you doing?!»

“Trying to save our skins!” Jim shouted as he quickly darted hither and thither, trying to choose which of the objectively terrible sheltering options was the least terrible. Flee in his car? Nope, the twister was currently blocking the only dirt road out of this trailer park. Go back inside? Of course not. Mobile homes are a tornado’s staple food source. Where was the lowest point they could get to in time? Jim looked back at the twister. It was definitely getting closer, and was that a cow up there?

Jim’s mind seized on the only option they had. “The ditch behind our trailer. That’s all we’ve got. Not gonna lie, Tod, we’re probably not going to survive.” Tod squirmed his way out of Jim’s grip and hopped back on the ground.

«We might have a chance, if this thing still works, that is,» said Tod flicking his tail holding the cube.

The din of the tornado was steadily getting louder, and its wind began to pull against their bodies. The two turned and ran to the drainage ditch behind the trailer, Tod gripping the cube in his tail as though their lives depended on it. Jim went prone, covering the top of his head with his hands. He turned his eye to look at Tod, but Tod wasn’t there. In his place was a vulpine sorcerer, executing the verbal, somatic, and material requirements for a powerful warding spell to protect them from the wrath of a god of destruction. He stood on his hind feet, manipulating that powerful arcane focus with his outstretched forepaws, tail and ears blowing dramatically in the wind, hind claws digging into the wet ground for purchase against the gale. Jim could hear him mumbling something as he rotated the cube, twisting the freely rotating corners of the device, The mumbling stopped as Tod quickly glanced up toward their approaching demise. He hastily traced an arcane rune onto one of the cube’s faces with his writing claw. The ink beaded up slightly and then was quickly absorbed into the cube without a trace. The spell’s requirements met, a metal stake extended from one of the cube’s corners. Tod jammed the device into the wet soil, and…

…critical failure…

The device glowed blue for a split second, then went dark again.

Tod often wondered what thoughts would be going through his mind in his last moments. Would he think of friends and family? Would a holy canticle be in his throat? Or would he utter some blasphemy against The Light that had created him? Whatever he thought would be on his mind in his final hour, it wasn’t this.

Tens of thousands of years ago, on a rusty planet neighboring their homeworld, there developed among the first wave of colonists and terraformers a strange animist cult. The spirits that this cult revered did not dwell in the wind, for their world lacked an atmosphere, nor in the water, for their planet lacked a hydrosphere, nor in the trees, for their new home lacked a biosphere. The genii worshipped by these heathens dwelt not in natural things but in the artifices of mortal paws. Within every machine—the cult believed—dwelt a fickle spirit that must be appeased with various arcane rites. The most sacred of these rites was the holy sacrament of Percussive Maintenance, where a shaman would deliver a ritual knock with a blessed wrench upon the chassis of a misbehaving machine. As subsequent waves of colonists arrived on that ruddy planet, the cult was diluted and pushed out of the collective memory, but traces of their beliefs lingered on, especially among the rank and file of the military. Ask any of Tod’s fellow soldiers, and they would dismiss such superstitious nonsense. But sometimes… sometimes an engine wouldn’t spool up, or a fabricator leasemind would refuse to boot. All the normal troubleshooting steps would be followed: Identify the problem, Establish a theory of probable cause, Test the theory, blah blah blah. But every attempt would fail. Then, out of desperation, the frustrated tech assigned to fix the problem would utter a prayer to the heathen spirit dwelling in the machine, whack the offending mechanism with a wrench, and it would spring to life, the spirit within evidently pleased with the ritual.

Tod looked up again. The roaring hell vortex was almost upon them. He saw a giant beast, hoofed and horned, careening through the air toward them. «What’ve I got to lose?» Tod thought as he picked up a rock and bashed the cube with it.

The machine spirit was appeased.

In an instant, the cacophony was quieted. Jim noticed the sudden lack of noise and risked an upward glance. Just as he did so, a cow slammed into an invisible barrier above them. Bright blue scintillations blossomed from the point of impact, arcing like the flashes of a detaching retina. The light cascaded down, tracing the hemispherical outline of their ephemeral shield. The cube emitted a subtle whine as the hypercapacitor within absorbed the kinetic energy of 1800 kilograms of bovine mass traveling at 134 meters per second. The cow’s trajectory halted, it slid down and landed on the leeward side of the barrier. But the twister would not be denied its quarry. The cow let out a plaintive moo as it was quickly sucked back into the swirling mass.

Other missiles collided with the forcefield, repeating the light show and increasing the pitch of the cube’s whine as they did.

SLAM! A stop sign.

SLAM! A tractor tire.

SLAM! A transformer coil.

The chaos only lasted thirty seconds, but to both Jim and Tod it felt like an eternity.

Finally, the air cleared. Jim sat up and looked at Tod. Tod’s claws were digging into the meat of his forepaws, rills of blue-black ink matting the fur on his front legs.

«By the palms that nursed me, what was that?!»

“What on earth was that?!”

The pair said simultaneously, Tod indicating the retreating funnel, and Jim looking at the cube, which had stopped whining and begun a quiet low-pitched beeping.

Jim spoke first. “A tornado. Never seen one before. Don’t want to see one again. What… what is that thing?”

The cube’s beeping increased in pitch and tempo.

«A retribution field generator. It’s supposed to block relativistic kinetic weapons fire. Absorbs the kinetic energy, then you—»

The cube arrested Tod’s attention as the beeping became urgent. In a single swift motion, Tod wrapped the end of his tail around the cube, spun on his heel, and slingshot the cube into the air, then lost his balance, falling backwards onto his back. The cube traced a ballistic trajectory, flying much further than Tod’s mediocre strength could account for.

For an infinitesimal fraction of a second, the cube hung at the apex of its arc, then a pillar of light and concussive force burst forth from the cube and rocketed upwards, punching a large hole through the mammatus pouches glowing red in the last rays of the sunset revealing the purple twilight sky above. The pillar of light evaporated quickly, leaving no trace of the cube behind.

Jim stared open-mouthed at the hole in the clouds until he was alerted by the sound of tires on gravel, unmuffled by his now nonexistent trailer. A police cruiser and a pickup pulled up to the remains of Jim’s home.

An officer exited the car and walked toward the two survivors. One of the survivors was a man in his 20s, and was that his dog?

Tod executed a formal greeting, rearing up and patting himself on the abdomen with a forepaw, leaving a blue-black stain on his belly. «Ink sacs are probably dry,» Tod thought. «It’ll be a few days before I can write again.» He looked up at the uniformed human and attempted an introduction.

“*Chuff! Yip, yip! Huff, bork!*”

The cop’s demeanor immediately changed. “Ah! One of our little visitors from out of town.” He jogged past Jim and attended to the little arboreal canid. “You OK, little guy?”

“*Yip, huff, wuff!*” Tod responded.

“Tod, I don’t think he can understand you,” Said Jim.

«Well tell him I’m fine.»

“He’s fine, officer.”

“And you, sir?” asked the cop.

“I’m OK, I think.”

“That twister was ripping up the road. How on earth did you two survive?”

Jim looked at Tod, then up at the hole punched in the sky.

The cop turned back to Tod. “That huge laser thing, that was something of yours?”

“*Bork!*”

The cop squatted down and looked Tod in the eyes, which were shielded by crimson bandpass membranes reflecting the flashing lights of the cruiser. “I’m very happy you were able to save yourself and your friend, but you need to be careful with your fancy little doodads in the future. I just hope you didn’t hit anything with that.”

«A retribution field generator isn’t a ‘fancy little doodad’.» Tod mimicked the stress and tone of the officer’s admonition, but all his cynoid vocal tract could manage was “awAAA ohOO OOwaah”

“Anyway,” said the cop, standing back up, “We need to get you two checked out by a doctor to make sure nothing’s wrong.” He looked at Jim. “Well, we need to get you to the doctor. I’m not sure what we can do for our little guest, but I’d hate to think we’re leaving something untreated.”

«I’m fine, really. But if you need someone to give me a clean bill of health, we can have Sunshine take a look at me. All her medical stuff is stored on the Dewfall.»

Jim relayed Tod’s suggestion to the officer.

“OK, I’ll take you to the clinic, and we’ll have Mark take your friend to his ship,” said the cop, gesturing toward the pickup.

Just then, the driver’s side door of the pickup opened. The beeping cadence of a CW repeater ID and the smell of decade-old second-hand smoke drifted out of the cab. Tod slid back the bandpass membranes covering his eyes and tilted his ears forward in the yinrih equivalent of an excited grin. He recognized that smell. The truck belonged to one of the radio club members, the first group of non-yinrih sophonts the crew of the Dewfall set eyes on after arriving on Earth.

An older man got out of the truck and ran up to the group. He looked at Jim and the officer, then down at Tod. “Hi, little man, haven’t seen you in a while. Glad to see your OK.”

“*Chuff! Yip!*” said Tod.

“Ah, sorry I haven’t learned the lingo yet. You need to come to the club meetings and teach me.”

Mark looked back at the officer.

“You’re taking him to his ship. He’ll contact their medic and have her meet you there,” said the cop.

“Will do.” Mark looked back down at Tod. “Let’s get going.”

Tod slid another pair of bandpass membranes over his eyes and surveyed the remains of their trailer. It didn’t take long for him to find the little trunk he was looking for. It was impossible to miss. Well, for him anyway. The humans probably thought it looked dark gray, but to Tod it was painted in the Allied Worlds standard safety color, peaking at a wavelength of around 0.186 millimeters. He scampered over and delicately opened the lid, trying not to smear ink on the contents of the box. He pulled out the two objects he needed: a paw keyer and a pair of HUD specs.

The HUD specs looked, well, like a pair of reading glasses designed by a dog: two frameless glass lenses connected by a bridge designed to sit on the muzzle. The keyer looked like the rubber grip on a bicycle handlebar. Four keys lined the length of the device, sitting in shallow grooves sculpted to fit a yinrih’s four middle digits, with a fifth and sixth key capping the devices two ends, designed to be gripped by two thumbs. The HUD specs and paw keyer together filled the role of portable computer.

Tod wrapped the keyer and specs in his tail and hopped into Mark’s truck. He laid down on his back in the rear seat of the cab, gripped the keyer in his left rear paw, and put the HUD specs over his muzzle. Squeezing the two thumb keys together started the boot process. The two lenses frosted over, obscuring the roof of Mark’s truck. Reams of boot text, glowing a comfortable infrared, flowed down Tod’s field of vision. After a few seconds, the screen cleared and the login prompt appeared, the square cursor blinking expectantly.

Code: Select all

Localhost login

Username: tod

password: ********

tod@localhost:~$ omnichat

connecting...

connection successful

4 users currently online: 

tod

stormlight

iris

sunshine

==========

tod> Jim and I caught in some sort of windstorm. Both OK but our friends insist I see a healer. Currently on my way to the Dewfall. 

sunshine> It’s true you red-pelts really are unlucky.

tod> shut up. Your fur is just as red as mine, remember

sunshine> What fur? I'm a healer. I was just kidding, Tod. I’ll be there ASAP

<sunshine has left>

tod> /quit

<Leaving chat>

tod@localhost:~$ humansynth

Experimental human speech synthesizer interactive prompt

Enter phoneme string or /h for help

>>>
Mark looked down at his little passenger lying on his back, staring at the ceiling, left rear paw just barely twitching as he entered chords on the keyer. Little inky paw prints covered one side of the bench where Tod had pulled himself into the cab.

“Sorry I got my ink all over your vehicle,” Said a tinny bloodless voice coming from the input device Tod held in his paw.

Mark inhaled. The smell of a welcome rain after a long drought filled his nostrils. “Don’t worry about it,” Mark responded. “I believe we’ve seen each other before but I don’t think I know your name. I’m Mark.”

Tod uttered a few more oopaque yips and grunts. “It means ‘Steadfast Friend’, but that’s a mouthful in English. Just call me ‘Tod’. That’s the name Jim gave me.”

“’Tod’, that’s clever, you look like a little tod fox with your red coat and black ears.”

“Is that a good thing?”

“Sure. Foxes are sly little critters.”

“Interesting. This pelt color has some bad associations back home.”

“Is that so?”

“Having a red pelt is supposed to mean you’re unlucky, and having black ears means you’re dumb. I’ve got both, so I’m constantly the butt of jokes. Nobody actually believes that, for sure, but the teasing gets really old really quick.”

“Oh, sorry to hear that.”

The topic of conversation wandered here and there as the pair drove down the road. As they were nearing the Dewfall’s landing site, the subject of Tod’s military service came up.

“So you’re a vet, then?” Mark asked.

“Yeah. Never seen combat, but did a few peacekeeping missions. Relief supply deliveries, helping refugee camps, that sort of thing.”

The truck pulled up to the landing site. A small car pulled up shortly after, a bumper sticker proudly identifying the driver as a student at the veterinary school at the nearby college. A woman got out of the driver’s seat and opened the back passenger door. Another yinrih, completely hairless with black splotches on the bare skin of her paws and muzzle, hopped out and ran to the truck.

Mark and Tod also disembarked. Sunshine looked up at Mark and executed the customary introduction, rearing up on her hind feet and patting her belly.

«Light shine upon you, friend. My name’s Sunshine.»

Mark looked pleadingly at Tod, who was now incommunicado, having removed the specs and keyer.

“She’s saying hi,” said the woman. “I’m Sarah, by the way.”.

“Howdy, ma’am,” said mark.

“Sunshine filled me in on the way here,” said Sarah. “I’ll take Tod back to Jim at the clinic when she’s done with her little checkup. You can go if you want.”

“OK. Thanks for your help,” Mark responded. He climbed back into the cab and started the engine.

“Seventy-three, Tod. Come see us at the radio club so we can start talking for real.”

“*Yip, huff!*” said Tod.

Mark closed the door, but quickly rolled down the window for a few parting words.

“Tod, Thank you for your service,” Said Mark as he put the truck in gear.
Some random factoids:

I named Jim after Weather Channel meteorologist Jim Cantore. He was originally going to be called Ted after Tetsuya "Ted" Fujita, who invented the scale by which tornado intensity is measured.

Tod was originally going to be an elderly yinrih running away from a shady past. He was also going to be the doubting Thomas of the crew before I gave that trait to Pascal.

I started writing the story before settling on the nature of the underlay and how FTL travel and comms would work in this world. Originally there was a yinrih spacecraft in orbit so massive that you could see it during the day, implying conventional casual FTL travel. The reason why Jim deliberately ignores the cube in the original draft is that Tod isn't supposed to have it thanks to regulations about what yinrih tech can be introduced to Earth. He's still technically not supposed to have it because it's considered a weapon, and it is considered sacrilege to bring weapons on a missionary journey.

Erickson is located in central Texas, and is inspired by the town of Jarrell north of Austin. Jarrell was hit by an F5 tornado in 1997. I lived in Austin at the time and we went to see the aftermath that September for as a school field trip. In hindsight I think it was rather insensitive to bring a bunch of kids to gawk at it all, but the sight of houses razed to their foundations is burned into my brain.
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